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Postby seriveena » Sun Feb 04, 2018 9:29 pm

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Subject title: some drawing critique plsss

i would love some drawing critiques some stuff to focus on in my sketchbooks for studies etc... anatomy form etc..
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Postby Alpacamood » Mon Feb 05, 2018 4:46 am

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your props and costumes are very nice! I would say you might want to work on proportion and construction, specifically on the hands, feet, and faces. It seems like you're drawing with symbols for the things from imagination. the biggest example of it is on the second drawing, there are areas with a lot of dimension, which leads me to assume you probably drew it from reference, while making up areas such as the ear and the right hand because they turned out much more flat and wonky. If you want to improve in those areas, I say do a ton of deliberate figure studies, focusing on forms, and interactions with props. also avoid doing specific anatomical studies like copying anatomy charts and stuff like that, that wont really help your understanding yet. try to think about forms first before you memorize terms and patterns of an area. Good luck, hope this helps!


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