Alluffer wrote:Markdawg wrote:I do that frequently. I'll keep on improving. Keep checking out my work! Thanks for the constructive criticism. There is also my personal style I'm trying to perfect. Kind of comic book, kind of more realistic, kind of anime. Let me know what you think of tge concepts of these characters as well. Ask me questions about them to help me build them when you see them. I want to show you one last time the changes I made. You are freakin awesome!
Nice work! Really looking forward to your future works and helping you along the way


Heres some more concept art!
Scene - The concept behind Scene is fear. He is working with other governments to run the world. He is money driven, and is one big mystery. Fear of the unknown is his theme. He has a lot of power over the United States, and runs his super military in secret. He is a level 10 protagonist. His two greatest military experiments were a mistake, and end up escaping him. He is trying to catch them before they uncover information about his big picture, and his plan for running the world.
I would like to see other versions of his portail. I do want him to be a heavier character in the story without playing to big of a role in the plot. I also want tips on shading so I can grow his image better. He is the man behind the scenes. He is always in darkness.

I'll have more up this week.
Fabious Kain - He is a large group leader who appears to stand for freedom. He is a level 5 protagonist in my story. Although he is not be the biggest or the scariest character in my comic, he is very smart, and manipulative. He has convinced people that he is a prophet, here to destroy evil by any means. He is fully convinced that he is the key to eternal life, but has mislead himself to his own beliefs and believes that those who do not follow him must be destroyed. He ends up being a psycho. He was inspired by The Joker, his appearance is just more deceiving.
The main characters of my story run into him and almost fall victim to his deception. I'll draw the two main characters from my story later.
This is a really rough draft of him.
Feel free to ask questions about his persona. I will have better sketches of him coming.

Vidal (Snake) - He is the man in charge of the hunt. Exelent fighter, has unlimited stamina, can fire any weapon with 100% accuracy, has an incredible learning capacity (with photographic memory), does not need sleep, knows various forms of martial arts, and is the greatest super soldier. He usually wears a black skii mask to hide his face.