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Postby ehlihr » Sun Dec 03, 2017 10:23 pm

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im kidding. kinda.

idk fam just lmk if theres anything that could be better i like me some portraits. the reason there are two is because im a) indecisive and b) dumb
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Postby Mandilor » Mon Dec 04, 2017 10:26 pm

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Well they look really good. Maybe think about the background and contrast it with portrait. Although even that isn't necessary. The only thing that stands out as being off is the wrinkle on her shirt. Maybe look at some reference and figure out how that works. I think they usually swoop back up a little at the bottom but that does depend on the fabric is hanging and where the pull is. But yeah looks great, keep up the solid work!

 

Postby ehlihr » Thu Dec 07, 2017 4:03 pm

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Mandilor wrote:Well they look really good. Maybe think about the background and contrast it with portrait. Although even that isn't necessary. The only thing that stands out as being off is the wrinkle on her shirt. Maybe look at some reference and figure out how that works. I think they usually swoop back up a little at the bottom but that does depend on the fabric is hanging and where the pull is. But yeah looks great, keep up the solid work!


ooooHhhh now that you mention it i cant stop noticing it im !!! thank you ill keep in mind my fabric weights n stuff !!!
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Postby Moe » Fri Dec 08, 2017 6:45 am

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/roasts you

 

Postby ehlihr » Fri Dec 08, 2017 6:01 pm

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Moe wrote:/roasts you


omg ive been,,,, roas ted
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