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Postby nars290 » Fri Sep 01, 2017 12:22 am

  nars290
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Subject title: Teen Titan raven critque

SO i want you to critque evrything that i have the painted version you see is a repaint and the sketch for posing errors etc
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Im a young lad wanting to learn how to art properly

 

Postby Whoever1 » Sun Sep 03, 2017 11:53 pm

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I'm no expert at all but the drawing phase its okay, the only thing that jumps out is the neck and the right arm, the neck feels a bit too long and the right hand is backwards, we should be seeing the pinky, not the thumb and it feels kinda broken, maybe try to work on the perspective a bit more, otherwise you could try to arrange the composition a bit, maybe find a more dynamic line crossing the canvas and maybe move her a little to the left or right; but that's more subjective than anything, it's fine as it is. As for the painting part, i'm maybe on the same skill level as you but something i can definetly say about it is that you should try to color shift the shadows toward the color of your light source, picking just a darker value of the color is what makes it look boring and washed out. Also check your values there are a few spots were the values of the figure and the background are a bit too close.

 

Postby nars290 » Mon Sep 11, 2017 2:30 pm

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Thank you very much
Im a young lad wanting to learn how to art properly


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