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Postby Neska » Wed Aug 02, 2017 6:54 pm

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Subject title: NSFW->Looking for advice.*Edited: fixed up image displaying*

Hey, everyone! I painted this lady a few days ago and I am feeling as something is not working. Could you lend me a hand?
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Postby Mandilor » Sat Aug 05, 2017 4:58 am

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hmm, the thing that seems to not be working is the image link, or upload, whichever. It's not showing up for me.

 

Postby Josephcow » Sat Aug 05, 2017 5:22 pm

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well, shouldn't her butt end at the same place as the hand is resting, or even above it?

 

Postby Neska » Sat Aug 05, 2017 5:25 pm

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Josephcow wrote:well, shouldn't her butt end at the same place as the hand is resting, or even above it?


Owww!!! That's true, I did not realize it until now, thank you so much!! ^^

 

Postby behxmot » Sun Aug 06, 2017 12:26 am

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the main thing that sticks out to me is that the background is very close in value to the character, which blends them together
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