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Postby Mii777 » Sat Jul 29, 2017 2:48 am

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Subject title: Im back, howmi doin?

Havnt posted here in years, and havnt drawn even once in about 5 months before today, and havnt drawn seriously in almost a year. so I did this sketch today, just tell me watever about it. (its unifinished)

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Postby Audiazif » Sat Jul 29, 2017 4:57 am

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It has a case of "escher girl" syndrome. It is where artists try to contort the body into unnatural poses to show as much of certain assets (T and A ;) ). So if you want your poses to be more "natural", I would recommend using reference from life or trying the poses yourself to see if they are even possible.
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Postby Mii777 » Sat Jul 29, 2017 5:29 am

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Its probably the way i have it drawn, but yu have the top box turned way past wat i have her ribcage as. Her ribcage is about perfectly profile sideview, not turned that far, only her right breast is showing.

Its a very comfortable, normal feeling pose for me to do myself.

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Postby Mii777 » Sat Jul 29, 2017 5:39 am

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fiddled with it for another 2 minutes to kinda show better. shoulda been asleep hours ago, will reply later.

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Postby naundeeey » Sat Jul 29, 2017 8:39 pm

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It looks really good! I don't know what could be improved there, the fact that you haven't drawn for such a long time makes it even better!
You have a lot of talent!

 

Postby UnorthodoxThing » Wed Aug 02, 2017 11:54 am

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Sorry, I just thought big booty for a minor. o-o
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