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Postby snisetski » Thu Jun 15, 2017 6:55 pm

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Subject title: What do you think! (´・ω・`)

It's been a while and idk if I improved but I tried my best doing this! Please point out the flaws and pretty please point out what I did right, too~
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Postby KitKat » Fri Jun 16, 2017 4:02 pm

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First off, Boku No Hero Academia!!
Okay, lets get to it. The image doesnt really have a very clear idea. Is he breaking the glass? Making ice? For the people who arent familiar with the series, they might not get the idea of the piece. If you want to have an eye-catching piece, you should make it more understandable for the viewers.
The composition is okay but it could be better. The colours are quite boring, maybe use a colour palette so it looks more harmonious?
The anatomy could use some work. Do some research on foreshortening.
Other than that, the hair and the eyes caught my eye. The red looks awesome with the bg colour.


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