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Postby Kavilen » Tue May 23, 2017 4:24 am

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Subject title: Critique my first digital, please!

First finished digital piece. Please give your thoughts on how I can improve. Much appreciated!
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Postby giwayume » Tue May 23, 2017 11:55 pm

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I just have a little anatomy thing; the ear should start at the jaw line, not inside of it. The entire width of the profile view of this head is a bit too wide as well, making the jaw feel awkwardly long.

 

Postby snisetski » Thu May 25, 2017 7:47 am

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The cranium looks too big and in general the picture is pretty stiff, like something you'd see in a biology text book. The color values can improve. The hair just looks like a lump of different values of brown there. Maybe add some depth and proper highlights?

 

Postby jojule » Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:14 pm

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don't request a critique on the first of anything, wait until you've been playing with the medium for longer. Otherwise it isn't going to help you

 

Postby gricc » Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:01 am

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The colors are pretty boring and dull, try adding more hue variation like blues and reds
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