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Postby segujo » Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:08 pm

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Subject title: just another dragon

this is work in progress....
i'm aware that the wings are unfinished and the line work isn't fully outpainted.

next step is texture/scales on the dragon and that's really intmidating me..
also somekind of background/Environment... I'm thinking a burned forrest with mainly black and White Ashes and smoke and some red orange glowes/flames..

What do you say?
Of the things I haven't done and what you Think I've done wrong so far...

Thanks in advance!! :)
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Postby alnoth » Thu Mar 14, 2013 3:28 pm

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i really dont know what to think of the cloak opening. perhaps its not finished and all, it just seems weird to me - why is it there? apart from, you know, to show the boobs...

 

Postby segujo » Thu Mar 14, 2013 4:12 pm

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Hehe... well... there is actually a 'deeper thought' than just showing bare female skinn...
I want to imply that the woman is using her Beauty/Sexuality to help her master the dragon... maybe I need to redo the cloak opening a little. It's probably better to make it less obvious booby...

thanks for the input!

 

Postby Total100 » Thu Mar 14, 2013 4:34 pm

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Location: in my room. 1 laptop for video another laptop for forum. and a 1 sketchbook for drawing...

I cant put my finger on it.... her coloring method is different from the dragons, it looks like two different images pasted together idk.
I think the dragon is more messy and you can see the strokes, on her she looks crisp and clean, idk how to explain it. i hope your understand what i mean. very nice job though!
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