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Postby ferdiman » Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:39 pm

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Subject title: SpiderMan

Please critique. This is my second time drawing on a computer
spider1.jpg

 

Postby chilingo » Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:45 pm

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The brush Is to soft when you shadowing och lighting this guy. Use less soft brush and it will lok much better

 

Postby ferdiman » Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:39 pm

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Copy that, I only used the airbrush here, but i will try that next time. Thnxs

 

Postby jimmy_germain » Fri Jan 27, 2012 12:31 am

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thats really nice ! but the hand holding on to the web looks a little weird

 

Postby azkyeh » Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:27 am

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the left leg (our view, the right leg if your spiderman) is a bit awkward to look at

 

Postby Sycra » Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:13 am

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Because it's only your second time drawing on a computer, I wouldn't really give any critiques. It's just too soon. You need to be doing many drawings. In the beginning you will have a lot of problems, but because you're just starting out, you'll be able to solve these just by doing more drawings. After you have done a lot of drawings on the computer, and you find that you're getting stuck and don't know what to do to improve, that's why you should ask for critiques. But after your second drawing on computer, it's still too soon to be asking for crits.


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