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Postby Waveloop » Tue Feb 26, 2013 10:43 pm

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Subject title: witch one do you like best!

Please help me choose... this is for a friend!

http://youtu.be/NpZ5CZHvAPA
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Postby Minako008 » Tue Feb 26, 2013 10:50 pm

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I like the one in the middle.

 

Postby Aangkat » Tue Feb 26, 2013 10:55 pm

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the first one.
Since there are no other colors. The eyes pop really out and makes you focus on them ^_^
But that is just my opinion :D

 

Postby Minako008 » Tue Feb 26, 2013 10:57 pm

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Aangkat wrote:the first one.
Since there are no other colors. The eyes pop really out and makes you focus on them ^_^
But that is just my opinion :D


Good point actually, I think I agree :)

 

Postby stnkjuc » Wed Feb 27, 2013 12:45 am

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First and third if border was thinner

 

Postby Waveloop » Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:12 am

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stnkjuc wrote:First and third if border was thinner


the border is just for crop purposes . I'm gonna print it... and maybe do a physical border like that with the same colors... or not... :roll:

 

Postby stnkjuc » Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:16 am

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I figured it was for a print so the border would be nice :] any other colour for the border will take away the attention from the eyes, as Aangkat said. But a border will definitely add the "finished" look! Well done on the piece, btw!

 

Postby Ambiguity » Wed Feb 27, 2013 3:32 am

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stnkjuc wrote:First and third if border was thinner

+1

 

Postby Waveloop » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:03 am

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I'm adding one more, but pretty much got this figured. The first is my favorite to. It just has more to do with me... it's pure, no distractions

here's another for you guys to discard :D
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Postby Total100 » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:22 am

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The middle one looks the best. it might be my eyes playing tricks but the lips are different in each one making the expression also different. the middle one has sort of a sad expression that i like. the first one looks mad. it might just be me though.
"Art is my cooking channel, i watch it, drool over it, and hope to one day make it."
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Here is my sketchbook= viewtopic.php?f=3&t=2900 :)

 

Postby Waveloop » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:32 am

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Total100 wrote:The middle one looks the best. it might be my eyes playing tricks but the lips are different in each one making the expression also different. the middle one has sort of a sad expression that i like. the first one looks mad. it might just be me though.



your eyes are fine :D

Yes I chance some small details in each version. nice catch ;)

 

Postby alnoth » Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:13 am

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im not too crazy about the frame... idk... is this going to be printed or just viewed on screen?

 

Postby virtueone » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:25 am

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I think I like the first best.

You're truly awesome. :D

 

Postby Ambiguity » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:25 am

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alnoth wrote:im not too crazy about the frame... idk... is this going to be printed or just viewed on screen?

Waveloop wrote:the border is just for crop purposes . I'm gonna print it... and maybe do a physical border like that with the same colors... or not... :roll:

 

Postby Zjacklee » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:50 pm

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Minako008 wrote:
Aangkat wrote:the first one.
Since there are no other colors. The eyes pop really out and makes you focus on them ^_^
But that is just my opinion :D


Good point actually, I think I agree :)


I also agree.
Look closely. Can you really See?!

http://zjacklee.deviantart.com/ that's my deviant. ^_^

https://www.facebook.com/Trplerainbow My fanpage.

 

Postby Waveloop » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:31 pm

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ok 1st one it is... going to refine it

thanks y'all appreciate it!
:D

 

Postby Total100 » Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:08 am

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okay i agree. i like the colors of the 1st one but the expression of the second one lol. they all are nice though!
"Art is my cooking channel, i watch it, drool over it, and hope to one day make it."
I'm Alex, I'm 12,
Here is my sketchbook= viewtopic.php?f=3&t=2900 :)


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