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Japanese Stylized Sketch

PostPosted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 1:51 am
by DarkLored123
Hello,

I have worked on this drawing for a couple of days and would like to have some opinions about what can be improved and so on. My aim with this was a simple pose from a common viewing angle, I was mainly concerned with simplicity.

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Comments on what can be worked on are much appreciated,
DarkLored

Japanese Stylized Sketch

PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 12:05 am
by Josephcow
What stands out to me is the cel shading is off/seems random. Where is the light source coming from?

Japanese Stylized Sketch

PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2017 2:21 am
by DarkLored123
You are right, I did randomly block in the cel-shading. I don't have much experience with lighting/shading so I focused on where I thought the cast shadows will be, don't know how well I executed that though. I just did it the way it appealed to me at the time, didn't really focus much on shading at all as much as I did on the figure itself. I'd like to think that the lighting is coming from the middle of the character.