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My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2017 8:46 pm
by snisetski
Hey there! Thank you for always helping me out in this forum

Can you please point out the flaws in this artwork? I know the nose can be better but I do not know how to make it better. How's the color, structure and anatomy?

Thank you very much! ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡

My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2017 12:07 pm
by UnorthodoxThing
what's happening around her head?

My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 3:36 am
by gricc
Definitely could use better values in her shirt and more structure to her hair especially, right now its really muddy and hard to read. Also, if you're trying to have a glow type of effect, her surroundings wouldn't be pitch black like they are now. It'd be more like a circle around the light source that fades in all directions. And be sure to fill up the canvas a bit more!

My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 6:59 am
by snisetski
UnorthodoxThing wrote:what's happening around her head?


It's supposed to be clouded in ahh pollution? (Gray thoughts)

My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 7:01 am
by snisetski
gricc wrote:Definitely could use better values in her shirt and more structure to her hair especially, right now its really muddy and hard to read. Also, if you're trying to have a glow type of effect, her surroundings wouldn't be pitch black like they are now. It'd be more like a circle around the light source that fades in all directions. And be sure to fill up the canvas a bit more!


Okay! I didn't want to put details in her hair, I wanted to emphasize on the colorful brain (inside her head, almost like xray vision lol).

Fill up the canvas with what? Any suggestions?

Thank you!

My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 10:55 am
by UnorthodoxThing
snisetski wrote:
UnorthodoxThing wrote:what's happening around her head?


It's supposed to be clouded in ahh pollution? (Gray thoughts)


Oh. Does it represent "depression" sinking in her head?

My artwork would like some help!

PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2017 1:40 pm
by snisetski
UnorthodoxThing wrote:
snisetski wrote:
UnorthodoxThing wrote:what's happening around her head?


It's supposed to be clouded in ahh pollution? (Gray thoughts)


Oh. Does it represent "depression" sinking in her head?


Yes, depression and negative thoughts!