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Postby snisetski » Sun Sep 10, 2017 8:46 pm

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Subject title: My artwork would like some help!

Hey there! Thank you for always helping me out in this forum

Can you please point out the flaws in this artwork? I know the nose can be better but I do not know how to make it better. How's the color, structure and anatomy?

Thank you very much! ╰(*´︶`*)╯♡
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Postby UnorthodoxThing » Mon Sep 11, 2017 12:07 pm

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what's happening around her head?
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Postby gricc » Tue Sep 12, 2017 3:36 am

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Definitely could use better values in her shirt and more structure to her hair especially, right now its really muddy and hard to read. Also, if you're trying to have a glow type of effect, her surroundings wouldn't be pitch black like they are now. It'd be more like a circle around the light source that fades in all directions. And be sure to fill up the canvas a bit more!
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Postby snisetski » Tue Sep 12, 2017 6:59 am

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UnorthodoxThing wrote:what's happening around her head?


It's supposed to be clouded in ahh pollution? (Gray thoughts)

 

Postby snisetski » Tue Sep 12, 2017 7:01 am

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gricc wrote:Definitely could use better values in her shirt and more structure to her hair especially, right now its really muddy and hard to read. Also, if you're trying to have a glow type of effect, her surroundings wouldn't be pitch black like they are now. It'd be more like a circle around the light source that fades in all directions. And be sure to fill up the canvas a bit more!


Okay! I didn't want to put details in her hair, I wanted to emphasize on the colorful brain (inside her head, almost like xray vision lol).

Fill up the canvas with what? Any suggestions?

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Postby UnorthodoxThing » Tue Sep 12, 2017 10:55 am

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snisetski wrote:
UnorthodoxThing wrote:what's happening around her head?


It's supposed to be clouded in ahh pollution? (Gray thoughts)


Oh. Does it represent "depression" sinking in her head?
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Postby snisetski » Tue Sep 12, 2017 1:40 pm

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UnorthodoxThing wrote:
snisetski wrote:
UnorthodoxThing wrote:what's happening around her head?


It's supposed to be clouded in ahh pollution? (Gray thoughts)


Oh. Does it represent "depression" sinking in her head?


Yes, depression and negative thoughts!


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