This is dope I like the colors.
I 'm not sure how I feel about how the hair is hanging in two big pieces over the shoulders though. It reminds me of the cartoon version of tarzan. It just feels a bit unnatural/odd.
I also don't really care for the soft glow from the background around the hair and hands etc. I feel like this works well as a cel shaded piece and the glow just makes it more complicated than needed. It also kind of flattens the form to me because you put it even on parts of the hair that the main light source is touching. Not that you can't combine soft and hard cel shading, but that aspect of it needs some work.