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Postby Steamrider » Thu Aug 31, 2017 3:57 am

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Subject title: Character Design for a comic

I'm (very slowly) working on my first comic. I'm definitely still on the designing stage with most things, I've been through many iterations of alot of characters.

I think this one is done, so I was interested on getting some second opinions on her design. I'm pretty happy with it, but again second opinions are very nice.

So some backstory, Its an underwater comic full of mermaids. This is a jellyfish mermaid. She is a telapath and is from the deep sea. so she is supposed to be kinda creepy and alluring. I havnt found a name for her yet

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Postby gricc » Thu Aug 31, 2017 5:55 am

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looks pretty cool! But I would definitely go through some different designs before settling on one. I Think it'd look nice if she were almost like the jellyfish from Shark Tale and how the top of the jellyfish is their head but it would be super wide like the lions mane, if that makes sense.
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Postby UnorthodoxThing » Mon Sep 04, 2017 9:23 am

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I would love to know how creepy and alluring mesh together. o.o/
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