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Postby FeatherBow » Thu Aug 24, 2017 5:15 pm

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Subject title: critique about the figure, forms

Need some critique about the figure, forms, composition. I didn't study color and light yet.
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Postby lo-fi » Sat Aug 26, 2017 10:06 am

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Hello, I have to say you got nice colors with the greens and hints of red. But some of the form can need some work. The knee on the right leg seems mushed and smaller then compared to the rest of the leg. With that the crease under the knee it can be moved down slightly. Also I noticed the tan hand looks semi flat, possibly add more shading. I also feel like the backpack could have more detail, but the general forms is readable , so thats good!
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Postby fi_le » Sun Aug 27, 2017 7:32 pm

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Firstly, cool colours and interesting texture. Also I totally dig the backpack.
I wouldn't have much to say except maybe the distance between pelvis and ribcage.I know you are going for a 8-head-ish figure but there is a rule that a fist should fit between the ribcage and pelvis. You don't have to obey all them rules but you might consider.
Good luck fam.
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