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Digital painting NSFW

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2017 5:29 pm
by Conejologia
I want to share this with you guys, and every critique is welcome :)

Digital painting NSFW

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2017 8:19 pm
by Audiazif
It is nicely painted but the refection is off. Based on the orientation of the robot the reflection would be the opposite 3/4 view as what is now.

Digital painting NSFW

PostPosted: Wed Aug 16, 2017 11:05 pm
by Conejologia
Audiazif wrote:It is nicely painted but the refection is off. Based on the orientation of the robot the reflection would be the opposite 3/4 view as what is now.

Thanks! for your feedback you're right xD

Digital painting NSFW

PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2017 10:36 am
by fi_le
You did a quite solid job on the painting part but I could spot a few issues.
The cracks on the figure on the right hand side are a little off. Think of them like panel lines on a mech or something. Also try to imagine her pelvis because the crotch lines suggest that she is turning to the camera but her waist suggests that she faces the robot. You can move ribcage and pelvis independently but crotch and waist can't. I think those can be fixed pretty easily.
Good luck and your journey. :)