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Postby Conejologia » Wed Aug 16, 2017 5:29 pm

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Subject title: Digital painting NSFW

I want to share this with you guys, and every critique is welcome :)
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Postby Audiazif » Wed Aug 16, 2017 8:19 pm

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It is nicely painted but the refection is off. Based on the orientation of the robot the reflection would be the opposite 3/4 view as what is now.
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Postby Conejologia » Wed Aug 16, 2017 11:05 pm

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Audiazif wrote:It is nicely painted but the refection is off. Based on the orientation of the robot the reflection would be the opposite 3/4 view as what is now.

Thanks! for your feedback you're right xD

 

Postby fi_le » Mon Aug 28, 2017 10:36 am

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You did a quite solid job on the painting part but I could spot a few issues.
The cracks on the figure on the right hand side are a little off. Think of them like panel lines on a mech or something. Also try to imagine her pelvis because the crotch lines suggest that she is turning to the camera but her waist suggests that she faces the robot. You can move ribcage and pelvis independently but crotch and waist can't. I think those can be fixed pretty easily.
Good luck and your journey. :)
...you see, it's supposed to be fi_le like the file from the computer... the one where you put the data things in.

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