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Hey there! Help me out please

PostPosted: Mon Aug 14, 2017 5:53 pm
by snisetski
It's been a while since I drew something (big). With this piece, I tried to play with the angle and set the vanishing point low and did some foreshortening. Please critique it and tell me if you found any flaws. Did you find something that was fine, too?

Thank you very much!

Hey there! Help me out please

PostPosted: Mon Aug 14, 2017 8:26 pm
by Josephcow
Something about the perspective of the head seems off. We should see the underside of the chin. Ear should be much higher since her head is tilted.

Hey there! Help me out please

PostPosted: Tue Aug 15, 2017 5:32 am
by gricc
I agree with Joseph, definitely work on your perspective. Try the Drawabox challenge. I did recently and it helped a lot!

Hey there! Help me out please

PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2017 2:43 am
by owllwings
It would probably help you to learn basic anatomy and perspective before making a finished, rendered painting. You're making it way harder for yourself to figure out the exact problems you're having.