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Postby SlimRock » Mon Aug 07, 2017 1:16 am

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Subject title: Character Grey-scale sketchn'

Sup guys. Just doing some random character grey scale sketches. Thought I should share. Critiques or comments are always welcome :) .
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Postby Spider » Mon Aug 07, 2017 1:54 am

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The only thing that really bothers me is the way you drew the hair, it has some really solid shapes and I think it could be more dynamic. I would make some looser and more broken strands, and play a little more with the movement of the hair. Made some sketches to show you what I mean :D
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Postby SlimRock » Tue Aug 08, 2017 6:05 am

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Dude Spider, those are some dope sketches mate. Thanks for the critique and I will def put it in thought going forward :D
Spider wrote:The only thing that really bothers me is the way you drew the hair, it has some really solid shapes and I think it could be more dynamic. I would make some looser and more broken strands, and play a little more with the movement of the hair. Made some sketches to show you what I mean :D


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