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Postby kchov » Fri Aug 04, 2017 7:19 am

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Subject title: Android

I attempted a speed paint and definitely did a lot wrong. What are the major spots for me to improve on?
Thanks!
Android Speed Paint finlow res.png

 

Postby naundeeey » Fri Aug 04, 2017 5:13 pm

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Her boob is too close to the border.
Here is a quick fix of lightsource, forms and facial proportions.
Also be careful with that mouth nose distance, we don't want our androids to have fetal alcohol syndrome. ;)

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Also also note the muscles in the armpit


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