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Postby Kingw777 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:34 pm

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Subject title: fun project needs input

So I finally got bit by this zombie craze bug and think i wanna do a funny picure for it(cant stand making anything super serious I always want my stuff to make someones day a bit brighter. ) heres what i have so far a quick little sketch in my little note book. Any ideas to help me out before i go larger scale and coloured?
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Pretty sure I'm gonna title it "maybe I over did it?"

 

Postby Kingw777 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:57 pm

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Haha yeah that would be kool

 

Postby Roger » Sun Jan 08, 2012 7:59 pm

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Bring in the store closer, actually connected to the sidewalk. Giving it a better perspective view or add a parking lot, move the girl a bit further away from the zombie so that she ins't in the center.
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Postby Kingw777 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:17 pm

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Okay so the perspective definitely needs something. Heres a quick new perspective maybe I can give it a far out background. Something like apocalyptic or something with zombies?
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Postby Roger » Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:29 pm

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then what would she be leaning on if it isn't the pile of zombies? I think placing the zombies for her to lean on is better rather then to the side of her.
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Postby Kingw777 » Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:38 pm

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Okay I think thats what I'll do then her leaning on the pile of zombies remains lol. What would be the best back ground for something like this?

 

Postby Roger » Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:45 pm

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Whatever you want it to be, it isn't our drawing it's yours.
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Postby Lanteyah » Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:52 am

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Image

Tried fixing some of your form for you.

 

Postby Zargogo » Wed Jan 11, 2012 8:44 am

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Lanteyah wrote:Image

Tried fixing some of your form for you.

Very nice, but a bit too exaggerated. At least for my taste ;)

 

Postby Kingw777 » Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:09 am

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Well it was really just a rough rough draft but thqnk you that actually helps. I do have a incredably difficult time with the hips that really does show me the proper way to draw them I appreciate it

 

Postby Roger » Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:44 am

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So how is the progress on this drawing so far?
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Postby Kingw777 » Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:50 am

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well so far non-exisistant lol. i recently tore a ligamemt in my knee and between that, school, and work ive not gotten much done on any drawings. amd the leg is leaving me exhuasted in any freeyime i do have has been devoted to sleep. :( if i get anywhere on this ill be sure to post something up.


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