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Postby Whoever1 » Tue Aug 01, 2017 12:26 am

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Subject title: Value Dog

So i've been "studying" values for something like two months but this is the first time i've put in to practice what i think i've learned. I wish i could show you the original but it was a borrowed photo and i no longer have it. In my eyes the values aren't too bad, but i'd like to have someone else's view on it. Also some values got a bit brighter when i scanned it, just something to consider.
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Postby Audiazif » Fri Aug 04, 2017 11:31 pm

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I think this is kind of along the lines of a "spotty" drawing. There are spots of value and they all don't seem to be cohesive to one another. This happens usually when someone is seeing all the detail instead of the bigger value shapes. First look for the big shapes of value and then add detail and refine those shapes.
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Postby Whoever1 » Tue Aug 08, 2017 12:31 am

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I guess that's right, i have trouble making out shapes when there are smooth gradients so i'll work on that.


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