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Postby SvyatLyk » Sat Jul 29, 2017 4:12 pm

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Subject title: Critique This Please

This is a Painting I did 7/28/17
please give some critique.
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Postby Alpacky » Sat Jul 29, 2017 5:50 pm

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Fixed some face stuff removed some visual clutter. I think u need to work on intentional design of the body, rather than just sorta adding lines and hoping they look nice, which is sorta what I see happening.
Also, tried to fix the overall form a tiny bit but... it was way to hard given all the lin s and things
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I draw stuff sometimes and it looks like this: (Latest work on page 8)http://forum.sycra.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=76279

 

Postby SvyatLyk » Sat Jul 29, 2017 8:56 pm

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Ok thank you, next time I will definitely focus more on intentional design. I also agree that it it's hard to read what's going because of all the lines. Btw I also really liked how you did his neck. TY :D


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