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Postby TheSpah » Tue Jul 25, 2017 9:19 pm

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Subject title: Critique portrait.


 

Postby naundeeey » Wed Jul 26, 2017 6:46 pm

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Looks really good!
The lines and hatches are kinda chaotic yet the overall image works!

There is not much I could criticize here unless I could take a look at the reference :D

 

Postby Alpacky » Wed Jul 26, 2017 9:06 pm

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The values need some work. Maybe its a limitation of your pencil but i dont believe so.
All the shading around the eyes blends together and offers no subtle detail. its not much but it would also help draw the viewers eye to... wel... the eye :D
I draw stuff sometimes and it looks like this: (Latest work on page 8)http://forum.sycra.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=76279


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