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Postby californiaRoll » Thu Jul 20, 2017 9:10 pm

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Subject title: Ayyy gimme critique

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So that when people see my next drawings they'll be like "wow dude so godlike, upvote"

 

Postby Fantelle » Sat Jul 22, 2017 5:04 pm

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Postby californiaRoll » Sat Jul 22, 2017 8:15 pm

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I didn't even think about composition that much, outside of minimizing negative space for the sake of a fiery thumbnail....which I guess makes you feel like walls are closing in on you. That's a piece of criticism I've never gotten before, but yes this is the full picture. Light source almost directly above, leaning slightly towards audience-right; thought I made that clear in the image but apparently I BLOW ASS at shading and Bob Ross is rolling in his grave. No biggie.

You are correct that my shades could use a splash of colour to make things PAHP. So thanks, BB.

 

Postby Josephcow » Sun Jul 23, 2017 5:18 pm

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Dang she is built like a snowman! What a body!

Don't forget about cast shadows!


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