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Postby Whoever1 » Mon Jul 17, 2017 12:27 am

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Subject title: Coloring advice

Somewhere on the process i messed up shadow color, but ended up liking the results, otherwise anything you can give feedback on is very welcome. Also if there are any issues on the drawing part please let me know.
I kinda like the expression tho
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Postby Josephcow » Tue Jul 18, 2017 1:37 am

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You might want to make sure the cel shading is completely right first. You've got some shadows where there would still be light, and some light where it can't reach. Nothing really strikes me as being bad about the color.


Postby Whoever1 » Mon Jul 24, 2017 4:54 pm

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Yeah that's a thing i need to work on a lot. I have trouble with ighting in general but glad to know my colors aren't off. Also i feel some values are a bit too similar or don't create a good enough contrast.

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