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Postby Bishop » Tue Jul 04, 2017 2:05 pm

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Subject title: Please Critique My Study

hey guys i would love critique on this one , thanks in advance.

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Postby goago » Tue Jul 04, 2017 7:59 pm

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The likeness is fine, only the distance between mouth and lips is a bit smaller. The main problem are the values. Her hair and the pupils should be much darker, from what i can tell you did a good job at the skin tho. I would suggest turning the ref to grayscale if ur doing a value study. Makes things much easier.
Keep going lad!

 

Postby Josephcow » Wed Jul 05, 2017 12:23 am

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Cool! Check the value on the hair!

 

Postby Bishop » Wed Jul 05, 2017 6:19 am

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goago wrote:The likeness is fine, only the distance between mouth and lips is a bit smaller. The main problem are the values. Her hair and the pupils should be much darker, from what i can tell you did a good job at the skin tho. I would suggest turning the ref to grayscale if ur doing a value study. Makes things much easier.
Keep going lad!


thanks for feedback i will work on that


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