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Postby ManyTcnj » Sun Jun 04, 2017 7:18 pm

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Subject title: Beer Label

Hey all,

I'm preparing a piece to submit to a collective that does beer labels. I have more polishing to do, but would love to get some feedback on the drawing (my weak point). I tried to focus on construction to hopefully achieve an anatomically correct, exaggerated, solid looking object. Any other opinions also welcome!
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Postby Audiazif » Fri Jun 09, 2017 5:33 am

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I think this first iteration was better. The new one is lacking something that this one has. It has a better design and composition. It also has more gesture or looseness to it. If you are trying to focus on construction don't neglect gesture and design. Build the construction and structure on top of a loose gesture or sketch. If you start with structure, the end product will turn out stiff.
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