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Critique my first digital, please!

PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2017 4:24 am
by Kavilen
First finished digital piece. Please give your thoughts on how I can improve. Much appreciated!

Critique my first digital, please!

PostPosted: Tue May 23, 2017 11:55 pm
by giwayume
I just have a little anatomy thing; the ear should start at the jaw line, not inside of it. The entire width of the profile view of this head is a bit too wide as well, making the jaw feel awkwardly long.

Critique my first digital, please!

PostPosted: Thu May 25, 2017 7:47 am
by snisetski
The cranium looks too big and in general the picture is pretty stiff, like something you'd see in a biology text book. The color values can improve. The hair just looks like a lump of different values of brown there. Maybe add some depth and proper highlights?

Critique my first digital, please!

PostPosted: Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:14 pm
by jojule
don't request a critique on the first of anything, wait until you've been playing with the medium for longer. Otherwise it isn't going to help you

Critique my first digital, please!

PostPosted: Tue Jun 13, 2017 6:01 am
by gricc
The colors are pretty boring and dull, try adding more hue variation like blues and reds