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Postby babuncio » Mon May 08, 2017 6:09 pm

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Subject title: please critique this all the way

I would like to see a repaint of this or just adding something by some1 with more experience than me :D thanks!
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Postby Heorge » Tue May 09, 2017 5:09 pm

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Why is Voldemort summoning Sadako?

 

Postby vanveee » Mon May 15, 2017 3:15 am

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The most important thing you need to work on is anatomy; practice drawing the human figure from reference with minimal/no clothes for a while (and i mean a really long while), then move on to using refs with fully clothed people, focusing on how the fabric folds, drapes, or clings to the body. Another thing I see is lack of dimension, as the shading isn't consistent. Try doing some form studies, and really studying and understanding how light hits different objects and the different shadows it casts. Keep working and practicing, because this could be a really cool piece!


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