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Can sombody critique this please :)

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 9:41 am
by fesknet
Hi I was wondering if somebody could critique my line quality.

Can sombody critique this please :)

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 10:54 am
by Iksnerogib
I would add more variation in the thickness of the lines.
But I'm probably not the best to say, as I'm not much into Japanese style.

manga_line_drawing_20170427_mdi01.jpg

Can sombody critique this please :)

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 11:18 am
by fesknet
Thank you for the critique. For me "clean line drawing" is one of the hardest thing for me to figure out. I know something is wrong but I can't figure out what it is. So I'm doing the shotgun approach and hope something sticks.

Can sombody critique this please :)

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 11:58 am
by Iksnerogib
fesknet wrote:Thank you for the critique. For me "clean line drawing" is one of the hardest thing for me to figure out. I know something is wrong but I can't figure out what it is. So I'm doing the shotgun approach and hope something sticks.

You're welcome.


Try to consider light in your line drawing.
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And maybe the "ghosting technique" will help you do clean lines: http://imgur.com/gallery/I1w7vi1

Can sombody critique this please :)

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 9:14 pm
by fesknet
I figured it out :lol: . Change to a different program from PS to Sai. Either way thanks