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Postby fesknet » Thu Apr 27, 2017 9:41 am

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Subject title: Can sombody critique this please :)

Hi I was wondering if somebody could critique my line quality.
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Postby Iksnerogib » Thu Apr 27, 2017 10:54 am

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I would add more variation in the thickness of the lines.
But I'm probably not the best to say, as I'm not much into Japanese style.

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Postby fesknet » Thu Apr 27, 2017 11:18 am

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Thank you for the critique. For me "clean line drawing" is one of the hardest thing for me to figure out. I know something is wrong but I can't figure out what it is. So I'm doing the shotgun approach and hope something sticks.

 

Postby Iksnerogib » Thu Apr 27, 2017 11:58 am

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fesknet wrote:Thank you for the critique. For me "clean line drawing" is one of the hardest thing for me to figure out. I know something is wrong but I can't figure out what it is. So I'm doing the shotgun approach and hope something sticks.

You're welcome.


Try to consider light in your line drawing.
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And maybe the "ghosting technique" will help you do clean lines: http://imgur.com/gallery/I1w7vi1
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Postby fesknet » Thu Apr 27, 2017 9:14 pm

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I figured it out :lol: . Change to a different program from PS to Sai. Either way thanks
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