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What i need improve in this piece?

PostPosted: Wed Apr 26, 2017 3:38 pm
by Chanime
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Anything that can be improved.
Please, make a OVERPAINT.

In others foruns/facebook groups a lot of beginners read books and don't apply the knowledge, it's a big problem, don't comment only theory! :evil:

Thank you for your attention <3

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What i need improve in this piece?

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 1:55 am
by ossifer
Hey! I made you a quick paintover, I hope it helps !

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I think your sketch is pretty good, but you lost a lot of structure when painting it. Also it would make your piece more interesting if you added colour variation- especially with animals and organic things, there's a lot of opportunity to create contrast with hue shifts.

What i need improve in this piece?

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 3:03 am
by Audiazif
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You need to improve your sense of form. The painting is flat. It was hard to tell how everything was supposed to be so I guessed. The main point of the paintover was to show form. It seems to me like you were too reliant on the sketch and in general reliant on lines. You need to learn to think in forms. That is how I did the overpaint. I started with a simple rounded box form for the head and a cylinder for the neck. Then added secondary forms like the cheek, eye, nostril, and mouth. All are simple spheres and cylindrical form.

What i need improve in this piece?

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2017 1:01 pm
by Chanime
Audiazif wrote:Image

You need to improve your sense of form. The painting is flat. It was hard to tell how everything was supposed to be so I guessed. The main point of the paintover was to show form. It seems to me like you were too reliant on the sketch and in general reliant on lines. You need to learn to think in forms. That is how I did the overpaint. I started with a simple rounded box form for the head and a cylinder for the neck. Then added secondary forms like the cheek, eye, nostril, and mouth. All are simple spheres and cylindrical form.


Thank you very much for your time and help! (NiiiiiCE OVERPAINT)

I don't disagrre of you, but please look this: (and sorry about my english :< )

This is a piece i make weeks ago:
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And now, what do you have to say?
What kind of study you recommend?
I don't like make copys.

Thanks ~(O_O~)

What i need improve in this piece?

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 4:31 am
by Audiazif
I am not sure what to say. I think it would be easier if you said what you are wanting to do with your art. Are you wanting to do more realistic or stylized? Or in between?

What i need improve in this piece?

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2017 1:37 pm
by Chanime
Audiazif wrote:I am not sure what to say. I think it would be easier if you said what you are wanting to do with your art. Are you wanting to do more realistic or stylized? Or in between?


I've done a few different studies here.
Thanks for the help, other artists helped me too, now I know how to study and where to go.

<3 <3 <3