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Postby Chanime » Sat Apr 22, 2017 7:10 pm

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Subject title: Need help with Perspective

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sorry for the image scale -_-

In the last study i don't used grids.

How i improve these perspectives? Please, make a overpaint, i have books and theory but the best way for a student improve is the overpaint.

Thank you for your attention <3
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Postby Iksnerogib » Mon Apr 24, 2017 12:01 am

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The way to improve at this kind of perspective is the same you would use for any other kind of perspective. By drawing boxes and other primitives.

P.S: Don't forget to draw guide lines for height too in your grids.

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Postby Chanime » Mon Apr 24, 2017 12:45 am

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Iksnerogib wrote:The way to improve at this kind of perspective is the same you would use for any other kind of perspective. By drawing boxes and other primitives.

P.S: Don't forget to draw guide lines for height too in your grids.

persp.jpg


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Mas se ficar apenas em caixas chega uma hora que não vai pra frente, é preciso formas complexas, eu queria saber se esses que eu desenhei estão se encaixando bem caso não estejam gostaria de ver uma versão deles se encaixando bem :/

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But it's nescessary complex forms for improve the perspective, i wanna know if my drawing are correctly in the grids :/
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Postby Iksnerogib » Mon Apr 24, 2017 2:03 am

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Nice to see another Brazilian here :D

Chanime wrote: i wanna know if my drawing are correctly in the grids :/


I know, but it's hard to say, as the line work is not tight. The form is hiding behind all the lines. It seems that you're insecure about the subjects form.
I don't know exactly which animal you're drawing there.

And, I'm not trying to be rude, but, if drawing boxes is not helping, you're not doing it right.
When insecure about something in perspective, the first thing to do is reduce the form to simpler objects... From big to small.

Drawing simple forms is boring, but it has to be done. I draw boxes everyday, I'm doing it for 2 years now. And it is helping me alot:
(pieces on the left are 2 years old)

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