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Postby Daxx » Thu Apr 20, 2017 3:12 am

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Subject title: Digital Panting Landscape

Here is a painting I did of mountains landscape with water. I know I can improve this peice although I am not sure how exactly to go about it. A general critique would be appreciated.
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Postby Alpacky » Thu Apr 20, 2017 4:33 am

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There's a lot of stuff that I want to say. But first things first.
The water would not be blue, even if it was, it would have tons of orange in it from the sky.
I like the style your going for. But add some more detail. Big broad strokes are fine, but they need to be accompanied by detail to be appealing.

The color choice, of orange against blue is good, but it doesn't make sense in this case.
Try looking up some mountains and pictures of the ocean.

Pic for reference of what I'm talking about with the water color:
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I draw stuff sometimes and it looks like this: (Latest work on page 8)http://forum.sycra.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=76279

 

Postby Daxx » Thu Apr 20, 2017 12:52 pm

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Thanks a bunch, I didn't think about that. Forgot water is reflective, silly me :lol: . I'll see what I can do


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