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Postby ManyTcnj » Wed Apr 19, 2017 12:52 am

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Subject title: Skateboard Art

Hello everyone,
I'm working on a skateboard graphic for my buddy. There's still a lot of rendering and polishing to be done, but any and all feedback, likes, dislikes, critiques would be really helpful. Really ANY feedback would be greatly appreciated and useful to me. Thank you!
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Postby Paula41297 » Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:50 pm

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Hey! I really like the concept but I'd try to make some of the shapes a bit cleaner (especially on the eyeballs and hair) and I think you could push some of the rhythms some more.
Hope it helps! ^^

 

Postby ManyTcnj » Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:59 pm

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Wow, Paula, really nice, thank you!
Yea, drawing, clean lines, rhythms, and shape language are all things I avoid at the moment. It might be too late for this piece, but definitely something I have to work on in the future. Damn your PO is nice, thank you again!


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