Submit your artwork for critiques here, or give someone else some helpful criticism or advice on their artwork. Please keep things civil.

Moderators: Ambiguity, SeaQuenchal, Waveloop, imcostalong, virtueone

 

Postby Alpacky » Wed Mar 22, 2017 10:56 pm

User avatar
  Alpacky
Posts: 312
Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2016 7:34 pm
Location: Massachusetts US

Subject title: Need help with legs... also character placement in the world

Subject above explains,
But if you see anything point it out! This isn't a super finished piece by any stretch of the imagination, just hit a rut with some stuff half way through.
IMG_0879.JPG
I draw stuff sometimes and it looks like this: (Latest work on page 8)http://forum.sycra.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=76279

 

Postby Marcelo_Steinhaus » Thu Mar 23, 2017 1:13 am

  Marcelo_Steinhaus
Posts: 103
Joined: Wed Mar 22, 2017 2:19 am
Location: Brasil

Hey! i think the pose you choose make it looks that she is kinda flying. So i tried to make her pose more solid, i'm really bad at composition but i think your image is too empty so i removed the empty part.
I presume that is a cape with she's weapons, if it is, you should choose what you think is better to put on the image.
Also think where are the light source

Sorry my english. Hope it helps
crit.png


Return to Critique This!

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests