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Postby Hayaku_manabi_jin » Wed May 15, 2013 5:50 pm

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Subject title: Frosty Background (Vid is okay)

What do you think?
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Postby Snakebreath » Wed May 15, 2013 5:58 pm

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Loos pretty good!! is it from memory or from a reference?

 

Postby Hayaku_manabi_jin » Wed May 15, 2013 6:00 pm

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Snakebreath wrote:Loos pretty good!! is it from memory or from a reference?


From memory.

 

Postby Snakebreath » Wed May 15, 2013 6:04 pm

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Nice! I see lots of different brushes used, looks quite experimental, in a good way :)

 

Postby Fedodika » Thu May 16, 2013 2:38 am

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It seems to be rendered pretty nice, but everything is so close in size that i feel like there is no real focal point. The moon looks the best out of the picture and has the most light but is so small compared to the aurora and hill. The water could use some work, making it look less flat against the hillside. I think you should make something in the drawing much smaller so that one thing will stand out so it's not all fighting for attention, you know?

 

Postby Hayaku_manabi_jin » Thu May 16, 2013 3:47 pm

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I understand. I'm wanting to put a character on the page, but I want to work on a design first.


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