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Postby ParanoidROACH » Fri May 10, 2013 10:16 am

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Subject title: A piece I recently made (Video critique ok)

Hello guys! This is my first post here, and I'd really like to get some constructive critique to help develop my style. This was my first time trying to make something without a defined lineart. I really want to get into digital painting, so I've gotta start some place, right? :p So, what do you think about this? What could I have done better/different?
Nymph2II.jpg

 

Postby Waveloop » Sat May 11, 2013 7:31 am

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from the top of my head, I would like it a lot better if...

Her head was a bit smaller,
You spend some more time defining her hair,
If her eyes were a little more horizontal.

something like this... but with more care :roll: ...

Nymph2IIc.jpg


but I like it. looking good

It's funny this reminds me a lot of a drawing that's in my sketchbook that I did on the ipad.

keep it up

 

Postby ParanoidROACH » Sat May 11, 2013 4:26 pm

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Yeah, now that you mention it, it's actually better the way you did it :p I'm still rather wonky with proportions and anatomy, so I guess it's something I'll have to work more on .. Thanks for the critique :)


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