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Postby Hayaku_manabi_jin » Tue May 07, 2013 4:11 pm

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What do you think? I'm awful at line weight sorry. :oops:
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Postby Kodachi » Tue May 07, 2013 11:00 pm

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This is very nice, there are just a few issues with body proportions, and Facial structure. the right arm is larger than the left, the fingers are too short and the nose and ear are way too large. If you learn and practice basic human proportions it could really help this image :D

 

Postby Ambiguity » Tue May 07, 2013 11:19 pm

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Redline to go along with Kodachi's critique:
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