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Postby deeten11 » Thu Apr 25, 2013 11:27 pm

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Subject title: Need critique (vid ok)

i just want some opinions on this anything will help. I used Photoshop
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Postby Snakebreath » Fri Apr 26, 2013 3:00 am

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At first glance the immediate problem I notice is the person, the joints all look extremely stiff, sit and put your hands on your knees, our arms bend when posed like that, I advice always looking at reference when posing someone, its a lot of help! Also try to study human anatomy, you'd be surprised how much it will improve your figure drawings such as this.

Edit: Also the head confuses me, is he wearing a helmet? if so add some more detail because at the moment it kind of just looks like a flat grey shape. :P


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