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Postby cpituba » Thu Apr 25, 2013 5:57 am

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Subject title: War Rabbit (Video Ok)

Hey guys! I've noticed some nice improving recently, and this is my last Illustration. Critique, Please! :D

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Postby marvel57 » Thu Apr 25, 2013 7:01 pm

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Cpit- this is cool and funny. I love the sizzling carrot-grenade :lol: . It works, I assume it being blurred is intentional. :ugeek:

 

Postby cpituba » Sat Apr 27, 2013 4:59 am

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Thanks man!! :D

But, sorry, the "blurring" (Don't know if this word even exists hahaha) is not intentional! It's a lot hard to me to make such things work!! D: I mean, i cannot give consistency to things, and my object borders never gets a nice definition! :\ Hope you guys help me with that!! Hhahaha

 

Postby Fedodika » Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:42 pm

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If you want to fix the blurring, use harder brushes and higher opacity around your edges. That should make your paintings alot more... Solid feeling? anyways, this is a pretty good piece, keep em coming! :D


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