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Postby C Bear » Wed Apr 24, 2013 12:59 am

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Subject title: Splish Splash (vid okay!)

Hurrah for practice/study art!?

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On dA.

Originally done as a sketch. (Click here if you're interested in seeing that.)

Also originally done as therapeutic piece (That would be the sketch) then decided to complete it. Not much to say except I was experimenting almost the entire time.

A couple things I realized after looking at the picture again:
1. I could have added more water droplets flying around.
2. The shading on her sleeve makes it look like she doesn't have an arm.
3. I didn't shade her nails orz
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Postby Waveloop » Wed Apr 24, 2013 6:10 pm

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Couple of things to add.
The way you lighted her cloths makes it look like she's wearing plastic... Not a fan on the eye position...they're to close to the nose. And those power flame things... you could put more work on that... it's to blurry.

But her pose is really working and composition wise it's appealing...so put your back to it... keep going... I feel this can turn out a lot better

but good job non the less

 

Postby marvel57 » Wed Apr 24, 2013 6:19 pm

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I don't like hot chicks w/ goats ears 8-) :ugeek:

 

Postby Waveloop » Wed Apr 24, 2013 6:28 pm

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marvel57 wrote:I don't like hot chicks w/ goats ears 8-) :ugeek:


It's better than hot goats with chicks hears imo :lol:

 

Postby marvel57 » Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:09 pm

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:? :ugeek:

 

Postby C Bear » Thu Apr 25, 2013 12:42 am

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@ Waveloop: The "power flame things" as you put it, is water. I mentioned that in my first post. I now notice the eye placement, thank you :3 I will try to pay more attention to that in future drawings

@ marvel57: They're not goat ears. :-/ She's an elf.
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Postby marvel57 » Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:40 pm

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C-bear-i know, just being an ass, nice work :ugeek:


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