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Postby messyink101 » Fri Apr 19, 2013 6:12 pm

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Subject title: Any Tips? (Can be used in vid)

I've been steadily trying to improve my technique with graphite. Any tips?

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Postby Fedodika » Fri Apr 19, 2013 6:44 pm

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Overall is pretty nice! the chest seems a little stiff and flat though, and the thumb doesn't seem to fully wrap around the thing he is holding. some things are a bit off center like the plate on his left arm and the letter on his pectorals. His trapezius muscles could probably fill his shoulder pads more to make his neck look rounder but that may not help i'll see if i can touch it up somehow and get back to ya! :D

 

Postby Fedodika » Fri Apr 19, 2013 6:59 pm

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I tried to touch a few things up, but the most thing that is just off to me is the emblem on his chest. I added some bulk to his traps, it may not be noticeable but change that if you'd like. and i pointed some things out that may be off center... Just little bitty things really
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Postby messyink101 » Fri Apr 19, 2013 7:13 pm

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Thank you so much! This helps a lot :) Seems I have to spend more time on overall composition in the future.


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