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Postby Ashoelke » Thu Apr 18, 2013 3:46 pm

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Subject title: Critique this please! I'd like some feed back! (Vid OK)

So I drew this a few months ago, hope I can get some feedback on it!
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Postby Snakebreath » Sun Apr 21, 2013 3:40 pm

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Make some of the shadows on her legs (and maybe other areas) a bit darker so its easier to see, besides that it looks great :D

 

Postby fideliz25 » Sun Apr 21, 2013 6:30 pm

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i like the drawing but it needs a little tweaks on the anatomy :)

on the arm it looks as if it becomes smaller as it becomes longer? the hand is kinda too short too..try to change that :)
also on the legs it looks kinda weird on the knees and shins

for the rendering, there seems to be no defined light source so it kinda looks a bit flat


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