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Critique Me~ (Video, please).

PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 1:27 pm
by irondoodle
This is my latest doodle, i feel really uncomfortable drawing the body from behind and that i didn't get the shoulders or the neck right. Body anatomy, proportion and other critiques would be muchly much appreciated :P image is 1920x1080 but looks horrible since i had to reduce its size to upload. here's the full version: http://puu.sh/2Cl6B

Critique Me~ (Video, please).

PostPosted: Fri Apr 19, 2013 4:54 pm
by Nipponkage
I hope it's not a problem, I just it a problem to explain in words. So basically I thought the collar was too low, and the other part that's circled , it meet's the nose too far forward.

Note: This is just what I thought was wrong.

Critique Me~ (Video, please).

PostPosted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 4:08 am
by vanyossi
Just a little thought. In my opinion, his nose and mandible should finish/start lower on his face, half way between the eyebrows and the chin. This means also that the ears need to be bigger.