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Postby irondoodle » Thu Apr 18, 2013 1:27 pm

  irondoodle
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Subject title: Critique Me~ (Video, please).

This is my latest doodle, i feel really uncomfortable drawing the body from behind and that i didn't get the shoulders or the neck right. Body anatomy, proportion and other critiques would be muchly much appreciated :P image is 1920x1080 but looks horrible since i had to reduce its size to upload. here's the full version: http://puu.sh/2Cl6B
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Postby Nipponkage » Fri Apr 19, 2013 4:54 pm

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I hope it's not a problem, I just it a problem to explain in words. So basically I thought the collar was too low, and the other part that's circled , it meet's the nose too far forward.

Note: This is just what I thought was wrong.
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Postby vanyossi » Sat Apr 20, 2013 4:08 am

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Just a little thought. In my opinion, his nose and mandible should finish/start lower on his face, half way between the eyebrows and the chin. This means also that the ears need to be bigger.


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