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Postby Evan » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:25 pm

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Subject title: please critique(painting)

Another landscape piece i did, I'm getting away from using textured brushes. Im trying to get a concept of light and shadow and establish distance,however i could probably use some help with this. please send me some critique. can be used in video
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Postby Tsatalas » Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:44 pm

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Hello my friend! Not much of a critique guy i am ... but u could try to darken the values closer to the viewers eye so it drops the rest of painting to the backround at least thats what i would try!!
Hope that helps!! :)
Keep it up :)

 

Postby Evan » Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:57 pm

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Thanks a lot for the help,establishing a good sense of depth is one of my weak points, I'm thinking of going and doing some more value studies. wondering if anyone knows some info on how reflections should be treated

 

Postby Tsatalas » Mon Apr 01, 2013 8:13 pm

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Well Sycra has a good tutorial about values wich i hope it helps! :)
http://youtu.be/g2fZdGZKP1k
But cant remember any tutorial about reflections!! :(
So im no good in helping with reflection cuz i have a long way to go my self!! :(

 

Postby Waveloop » Mon Apr 01, 2013 9:28 pm

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this is always a good read
http://androidarts.com/art_tut.htm

 

Postby Tsatalas » Mon Apr 01, 2013 10:14 pm

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Waveloop wrote:this is always a good read
http://androidarts.com/art_tut.htm

Man this something else!! :o
realy helpfull thnx :)

 

Postby Evan » Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:26 pm

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thanks wave loop this is some good read. alot to absorb in one sitting.

 

Postby glitch » Wed Apr 03, 2013 2:38 am

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This already feels a lot more 'real' than your last stuff.
Keep going.
I have some critique to give, but it's covered in Waveloop's link, so I'll trust that you just absorb everything from it.


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